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Darius, the aquatic sheep.
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Darius, the aquatic sheep. |
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Adriahh Junior Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 18 |
I've read all the warnings, I've not posted much response, I honestly have 3 kids and little time, but here goes..I'm not even sure this is in the right place, but it should be at least...different  Looking back it must have been a thursday of that week, I came upon the strangest site,t'was an aquatic sheep! Said he "My name is Darius, I live beside this beach, the days I spend up on the land, by night I'm in the deep. My eyes were wide my mouth agape just speaking was a task Questions running through my mind, but afraid, was I , to ask. "Do not be shy!" the sheep assured So out the questions came, of gills and fins and wooly coats, oh yes, and mating games! I asked about his politics, his mama and his pop, brothers, sisters,family pets, I never thought to stop! I got my books and pencils out prepared to write of him, I turned, just then, and realized that the bugger dove back in! [This message has been edited by Adriahh (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
different yes, out of place, no, *big smiles* welcome, hope you find a home here |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL this was cute! Welcome and your poem is not out of place. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
heh, funny poem Welcome to Passions, enjoy your stay I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message. This is cute..and fits nicely in with our poetry here!  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Welcome Adriahh! You know, for a first posting, this isn't Baa~a~a~a~a~d! (Ick, but the joke was, huh? Sorry! ) Actually, this was a most delightful and whimsical piece, and I enjoyed it quite a lot. Thanks! Claire |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome to passions A nice piece, and funny to. So you have your three little ones in stitches at all times. Well done with little time. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Adriahh Junior Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 18 |
thanks And I got the postcard, that's really a neat little bonus this site has I'm actually trying to be an artist, poetry scares me, I don't like anything too serious. Oh freaky little porcupine, come eat the hedgehog in my mind. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was really cute...got quite an image of that sheep missy!!! Welcome!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful poem to enter our family with! Welcome! Claire, yes, that was baa-aaa-aaad LMAO Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i need sequels i need sequels chase after him pleez! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
This is fan-dabidosy stuff, a wounderful idea, nice and original, well written, need I say more, well yes I could talk all day about this wonderful bouncy charecter you have invented, truly top class quality and fun, I need to here more of your poetry soon or I fear I will never laugh again . |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I saw LongJohn and Balladeer at the dive shop buying tanks and masks and such...Nice poem... |
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