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The stone of late
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The stone of late |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The stone of Late This day I knelt on fresh turned sod, With head bent low in prayer. And numbness held the pain at bay, As words dissolved in air. Her face appeared each crystal tear, That fell beneath my eyes. And each one brought a different thought, Negating her demise. I did not wish to understand, A reason for this fate. I only wished to compensate, This tragedy of late. There was one thought that passed my mind, But one of some dismay. This gift of pain although unkind, Will some day drift away. And I cursed my mind, the time and state, As my eyes burned on the stone and date. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To let go of the pain is not to let go of the love...that is forever. Your poem inspired me Sy, but then, they always do. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My tears fall in easy-remembering with the poignancy of this piece. 'Her face appeared each crystal tear, That fell beneath my eyes. And each one brought a different thought, Negating her demise.' Not ready to let it drift away ... my heart just doesn't want to, yet. Thank you, darling man, for something that has significantly touched me on this day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you my gentle echo. *L* Marge, You are also a sweet and gentle echo and I thank you. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Goodness, Sy, How superb your poetry, and so sad. I can't think of any other poet to pen this beautiful a piece. Your verses seem to get better, yet how can they. I am in awe. Love ya Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, this one is a real keeper. "Negating her demise" are three of the best words I have seen in a poem. Very nice job. ALso, I'm envious of anything that can significantly touch Marge.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This one touched me to my core, Sy. I join you in your tears. Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your words do sooth the savage soul And to write as well as you my goal. Love Sy Balladeer, From our poet laureate this is a true compliment. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sad it is i can see this A memory although it can be bliss Not forgotten means still there I'm gald that memories are there to share A nice and deep piece of poerty The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh how sad  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Seymour: This is heartbreaking in its beauty. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sad one Sy! But so good...thank you for sharing your wonderful words with us. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you so much you are sweet. *L* Helmut, Thank you my friend, I enjoy your comments. Hoot, A sad thank you. *L* Suthern, Your comment warms my heart. *L* PoetdeVine, My young old friend, thank you for the read and comment. *L* |
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