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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Why Tell me why some poeple cry Is it because they are numb inside Can you tell me why ~~~ Tell me why some people are crazy Is it because their world is hazy Please tell me why ~~~ Tell me why some people are lonely Is it because it is them only Tell me why ~~~ Tell me why I sometimes feel this way Is it because my world sometimes feels grey Why ~~~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I cannot tell you why I cry, Or face the world with a sigh. I cannot tell you why I'm crazy, Or why reality doesn't phaze me. I cannot tell you why I'm lonely, But I can you you're not the only One to ever feel that way, My world too, is painted grey. Good poem, Tracie. I relate well, even if I don't know the answers. Michael |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Michael what a reply I thank you very much, everyone now again feels this way at some stage during their life...once again thanks  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
numb, crazy, lonely, unreal, out of place, lost, adrift, empty, yes, I know the feeling, and you put your finger on it. Good poem Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
good questions Tracie...you keep asking them......and when there is a knock on the door, open it and ask for answers. Robert |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
great poem, the why's are hard to remove and answer cause we seem to always need more than what is right here with us. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Tracie! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
To all who replied thanks. the words are what I need to hear...I don't think there will ever be a true answer to any of these, but only a friends voice and outstreched hand to help get through. LoL thanks once again Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
There is often no understanding why. We all find ourselves in those places now and then. Sometimes, those feelings help us understand ourselves. There is a strength that comes from working through those feelings and knowing they don't last. Hope your on top of the world soon. Will look for you there. Danny |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Danny such lovely words of understanding thanks I appreciate itKeep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, I cry sometimes because I'm lonely. And sometimes I laugh...there is one woman in my life who can make me laugh. James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
If we knew the answers to these questions would we quest for answers to more questions. A thirst to know the unknow and a need to feel understood....the poet's curse or gift however you choose to see it. A deep poem with beautiful use of the truth. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James thanks my friend for your sweet reply I would hope there's more than one person in your life that makes you laugh  ~~~ Butterfly I know what you mean exactly..thanks for your wonderful reply it was well said Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Now you know why, so don't be grey, come out and play, and wite happy poetry!  Welcome!!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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