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Wrong Number . . . Right Guy ?
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Wrong Number . . . Right Guy ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Wrong Number ... Right Guy ? ~*Marge Tindal*~  Three rings. I answered, "Hello." You said, "Sheila?" I said, "No." Something disappointed in your voice. I said, "Can I help you." You said, "Do I have a choice?" I replied, "You always have a choice." You said, "I'd rather talk to you instead." Then you laughed and I laughed too. We agreed it was a silly thing to do. For a minute or two we enjoyed a polite exchange. Then you said, " I don't even know your name." I didn't tell you. I don't know why. Then you were gone. Wrong number. Right guy ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
There you go again.....where do you come up with these GREAT poems?!?!?! LOL  I loved this one....makes you just want to use *69 and call him back!!!!! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Marge!! Clever and delightful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well, Ms. BobbyCat~ This one REALLY happened a couple of years ago. He did call back ... and we have become really good friends. Isn't life just one great wrong number after another ! ! Thank you for liking my little slices of life ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Denise. I was reminded of the incident after reading Elizabeth's poem 'Sitting By The Telephone.' It's the way it really happened that makes it so precious in my memories. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sorry... I was thinking *86, not everyone's a winner. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LUCKY ! Incorrigible you are ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge as always I loved this one as well, soo talented...  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Good morning, Tracie. Thanks. Enjoy seeing your smiling face ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely written. The same thing happened to me before and we met and went out for dinner a few times. James |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Some girls have all the luck!!!  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, what a witty piece. I enjoyed this one very much. I needed a laugh. You are so clever. Lucky you to find a friend that way. You have all the luck. poor me LOL Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Glad to know it happened to someone else. Nan~ It was the Luck-o'-the-Irish. It happened three years ago on St. Patty's Day eve. GUESS WHAT HIS NAME IS? Yep ! Patrick !  Melissa~ LOL ! Rub that shamrock ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is so cute...why can't I have any wrong number calls like this...mine always want to sell me something |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The very same occcured one day The phone rang in the usual way But there was nothing ordinary About this voice that made me tarry Obviously no one I knew But we really hit it off, we two And so I used my sexiest tones To match his soft and velvet drones But then I realized he was not A man, but just a phone robot Oh, well, maybe next time Loved this Liz |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Well between your wonderful poem and everybodys coments I had my first laugh of the day. I have to say this too has happend to me but, I'm not so daring as you, maybe I will be next time. Thanks, Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
well done Marge ... my wife makes a lot of phone calls ( yah yah )... aside from the tons of 'kiss offs' she contacts a lot of seniors that are just dying to talk to anyone and a lot of small children that are home alone and not well versed in hiding that fact Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
lol, loved this, great poem, great responses...thanks much for the smiles |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marge, I'm surprised you did not recognize my voice. You know I am such an admirer of yours that I could not resist calling and expressing my desires for you. Then, as I heard you voice...I melted...and now have your sweet voice to remember each time I read your poetry. Your voiceless admirer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Pleased that you liked. Well, he says I fell for his line ! LOL ! Elizabeth, love~ Hmmmmmm ! Robotic romancing .... could be interesting ? ? Cerenity~ Daring? If you think this is daring ... you should join me hot-air ballooning, or white-water rafting ... LOL ! Rex~ What a great thing for your wife to do. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Danny~ Shhhhhhhh! I wasn't going to tell them that you are Daniel PATRICK ! LOL ! Honey, you can ring my bells anytime ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you are so cute, and this poem I much enjoyed. |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
I loved it,ships passing in the night sort of thing....sigh hello darkness my old friend |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, no one who called you would ever have the wrong number 'cause you're the right number in ANYBODY'S book!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Oh ... I like cute ! Thank you, thank you, thank you ! PATRICK ? How ironic is this? Thank you for 'passing my ship'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Now that's a compliment for sure ! I think I still just love you to pieces ! Pencil me in ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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