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Spreading Through
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Spreading Through |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Feelings of despair Coming from who knows where Deep down from inside Spreading through my body wide. I long to be with him tonight In his arms I feel so right. The tenderness of his touch and kiss Is what now I truly miss. There are no strings to tie us down I’m not a fool, he is no clown We are sometimes blind, we need to see To be able to set our souls free. To tell each other how we feel Is it imaginary or is it real. Does he feel the same as me? Only time will tell of the truth to be. To feel so strong about this guy It feels so good sometimes I cry. Every time I feel this way I close my eyes and begin to pray. I’m scared to tell him my emotion I care for him with total devotion. I wonder what he feel inside. Spreading through his body wide. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
kk, this is an emotionally excellent poem, sweetly expressed, well written. take care, janet marie When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice verse and rhyme! Feelings are expressed very well also. Good piece. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
This is such an expressive poem, so beautiful. I hope I get to see more of it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Marvelous emotions you've shared. For goodness sake ... TELL HIM ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you all for your replys.When written from the heart emotion flows from soul to paper. Yes Marge I told Him. We been togather almost 7 years now. Thanks again  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very beautiful thoughts. I enjoyed the part "I long to be with him tonight...in his arms I feel so right...the tenderness of his touch and kiss...is what now I truly miss. Sounds like a lovely relationship. James |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
This is so beautiful, you expressed yourself well. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is so beautiful, Kitkat! Denise |
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