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Tomorrows path |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Tomorrows path There is a place down by the sea, Enthrals my spirit and calls to me. Where waves wash down in gentle hand Upon the white and soothing sand Each crest of wave in tender soar. Speaks to me in gentle roar. And the wind blows in sultry brine, Showering me in wet benign. The smell of the sea lures me down, It offers me a Neptune crown. It sings to me a siren tune. Ever under a sky blue noon. It tolls for me eternal rhyme, In voices and in echoes chime. It plays a golden harp of peace And offers me supreme surcease. The tomorrow of a cul-de-sac, It's to the sea we are all called back. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Sy, I know this place so well. What a beautiful poem! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I was just ready to close down my computer for the night, when this wonderful poem appeared, and now I will sleep to the rhythms of the tides and the smell of salty air. Enrapturing poetry. Love ya Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ On the shoreline stand we now waves breaking at our feet. Ever back, we are called the pleasure to repeat. I like what you do to the sea ! I like what your poetry does to me ! ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Conjours up some great imagery. Very well written. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Soft, gentle, and beautiful..I really must see the ocean. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow...the ocean is a muse to me I think. I grew up on the shores of a wild ocean, and it lulled me to sleep each night...I pine for it now - although I live in my city surrounded by beaches they are certainly not in walking distance anymore! Thanks for this Sy, this beauty in poetry. K |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I feel it to, SY. It's mesmerizing as is your poem. Beautifully done. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Elizabeth, Marge, Germini, Alwye, severn, Michael, My sincere thanks to all of you I do enjoy your comments more then I can say. *L* to all. Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sy! This has been on my mind for the past 2 or 3 days in earnest....'to the sea'.....one of these weekends soon, for sure! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To the heights I reach for thee, whilst my friend visits the Sea; to each of us shall a passing wave his of water, mine of blue haze. Well done Sy! Thank you. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Thank you for the lovely. *L* Denise, It's a wonderfully restful place. Thank you for the comment. *L* Sunshine, Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
You've got a style all your own, Seymour...liked this so much. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, From one style to another, thank you much. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the ocean always beacons me to enjoy its beauty, its raging, and its mystery. I have always tried to live close to the sea. James |
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