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Beginning of Love
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Beginning of Love |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beginning of Love A new love, like the sun bringing forth, a new someone making each day warm and bright filling everything with radiant light All thats within wanting to give in another life longing to live seeking to know are feelings true endless hours spent lovin you Dwelling in shadows of my mind others before i'm now so blind yearnings to stir deep within me by your side, i'm aching to be Writing for hours, just your name fantasy moments playing love's game thoughts so strong making heart pound images of you now in surround Never before such luminous sky reflections of us in clouds gone by your carresses so tender on me overall in your arms, soft place to fall Love has arrived, finally here cupid and angels starting to cheer down that path my heart doth go that emotional side only love can show A sense of us there from the start so natural us heart to heart onward now our destiny bound Love has begun, let trumpets sound. < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
YAY,DannyYAY!!! Trumpets are sounding! I REALLY liked this poem!  -SEA |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny this is a very romantic poem. I like this one, it's one of your best. Do you have any other hidden abilities besides poetry writing....I would be more then willing to be your assistant if you would like to demonstate. Marina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ Wonderful soft images you've painted with these words. 'in your arms, soft place to fall' Reminds me of someone special. Thanks for shaking the memory tree. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This has such an aire of sentiment and romance, Danny. Wonderful writing...radiant reading. Thank you! ~ Claire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Writing for hours, just your name fantasy moments playing love's game thoughts so strong making heart pound images of you now in surround Never before such luminous sky reflections of us in clouds gone by your carresses so tender on me overall in your arms, soft place to fall Danny, this is such an emotionally perfect and lovefilled poem, how excellent. so many times "love poems" come out "sappy". this one is full of devotion and romance..very well expressed! take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I do like love poems |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Danny...this is beautifully written! "Writing for hours just your name" How well I remember doing that!! Wonderful love poem!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wonderful Danny. Let this love wrap around your heart forever. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Shout Hurray for this one! Very well written. Loved it! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I cannot stomach to read love poetry. Like JM said, they sound "sappy" too often. However, I could read this one over and over again. It almost brought a smile to my face and it definitely let warm feelings into my soul. Makes me want to do it again... Almost. When I say that, I know it was an amazing poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now Danny...don't you go getting soft on me Mr!!! (by soft I meant...er...nevermind!!) This was romantic, soft, gentle...very intoxicating hun...I'd say I rather like this side of you too!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sweet comes to mind...mushy also...hehe! Nive work. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Just a note to say thanks to all for such nice responses. Like most of you, I find many love poems sappy as well. I chose to post this one because I felt it had a different feeling that went beyond the usual stuff. Thanks again to all.... |
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