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But You Don't Know Me
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But You Don't Know Me |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
But You Don’t Know Me My dreams at night Wishing to feel you Longing to hold you tight Your kiss I crave to taste Could you ever love me? Or am I forever replaced My truth never spoken You with another My heart always broken I’m just a friend Nothing more All I’ve ever been I love you silently Deep inside me Can’t you see! But you don’t know me…. Marina Feb 22/2000 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sadly beautiful, Marina...unrequited love is heartbreaking....  Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, very beautiful, One of my favorites. Parker |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Mariana, this is a very nice poem. I like the brevity of your style and the emotion. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marina~ Good Grief, I know exactly how this feels. Ugh, my heart aches for you. This is a great poem.  -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, it is. . .I have to agree with Denise on this one. . .it's so hard to love someone and have them not even acknowledge your existence. . . Beautiful words Marina. . . you always manage to say a lot with a little. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely poem Marina and lovely desires. Keep searching because it takes two to tango. James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hear the echo of my own cries when I read this one, Marina... You've painted the pain beautifully... well done! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Denise,James,and Danny: Thank you Sea: I hope I haven't brought up any unhappy memories for you. sven: Thank you..I knew I could count on you to make me feel better. James and Suthern: thanks to you guys to. Maybe one of you strong men can come to Canada and make me feel better...any volunteers?? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Loving in the Dark. It's a hard place to be in. Step up and make him know you, Marina. You have nothing to lose. michael |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Micheal for that good advice. Maybe I should make myself known. Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven: What no painting or poems in this poem!! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Marina- I've had this happen once too often...and I might have lost out on a great love...TELL HIM!!!! They say sometimes friends make the best lovers sweetie, so go for it!!! If he backs out then he doesn't deserve you anyway!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, maybe on my next trip to Canada. . . just tell me where you are. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
devina you are right..sometimes friends do make the best lovers. If you cross the line however it can cause a lot of damage if both people don't feel the same. So Sven when are you coming to Toronto? Marina |
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