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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-02-28 11:10 AM


I got a chance to see
the man of my dreams
today at first mornings
light, with all of the
strength and might he has
right now he's sleeping
and very much a sight.

I guess I should not wake
him, he sleeps so very well
on that couch he loves and
will not sell.

I can't understand it, it's
tattered and torn, and really
does smell. The springs stick
out, the arms sag as well.

But some day I know and I can
wait, I will not have to share
my man with that couch from hell.


Cerenity


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-28 11:32 AM


This is great! Lighthearted, delightful!!

Denise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-02-28 11:29 PM


Hi Denise,

Thank you so much for your reply.
I have to say that it does not seem to matter what couch I have he's got the remote in one hand and is fast asleep.

Cerenity

bobbycat
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since 2000-02-06
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3 posted 2000-02-28 11:31 PM


Oh, are you sure you're not married to my husband???  LOL     he's a remote-sleeper, too!!!  Great poem!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~

Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-28 11:41 PM


Hey, it sounds like we are all married to the same guy.....hehehehehe  

Denise

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