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Nurse Kindheart
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since 2000-02-27
Posts 9


0 posted 2000-02-28 09:12 AM


Stute Newbie

Lost within a complicated world
of minds off in little isolated
worlds
of their own for delight of senses.
How can I unlock their doors
with unfamiliar dialect
and sight?
Where do I begin to show I care
when they shun me at every
corner?
I'm crying in my own world
they seem so fragile
all I want to do
is help.
Is there a door they'll let me open,
is there a door for me to try?
I'm here as a Stute newbie
yet all I do is cry.


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ONE FLEW OVER
Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55
Cuckoos Nest
1 posted 2000-02-28 10:42 AM


Hey Nurse, my doors always open
and I'm a pretty interesting fellow.
I'm up on the North wing painted yellow
we could sit and play some cards you think,
cause our old Nurse Crachet she's off having a drink?

Justin Nuendo
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
2 posted 2000-02-28 11:14 AM


Hey Nursey be careful
For ONE FLEW OVER
He's got in his room a real nest
No telling what aweful
Things you uncover
He's sometimes really depressed !

You seem rather lost
And cry quite a bit
Already in a world of your own ?
Better quit at all cost
If you want to fit
in, otherwise in these tears you'll drown !

**Handing the Nurse his hanky** Sorry sister, don't 'ave a clean one, but this one was washed last year  



[This message has been edited by Justin Nuendo (edited 02-28-2000).]

Nurse Kindheart
New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 9

3 posted 2000-02-28 02:47 PM


My which way do I turn,
in the kitchen will I burn?
Do I need to always beware
or at times can I take a dare?
Right now a guide would do fine
I promise to share a glass of wine.
I didn't mean to cry no hanky needed
In my situation I have simply pleaded
to walk easiest amongst the best of you
I need to have a complete and honest view.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
4 posted 2000-02-28 05:17 PM


Say hey Nurse K please dry those eyes
There ain't no need for all your cries

This here warning I will give you
If in the 'Stute you will be too

We'll let you in through any door
But walk through some, you're seen no more

I'm Andrew Scott, the Crayon King
The one who rules the 'Stute's East Wing

Playing with crayons is my crime
Gas and wax mix are my hot time

Lady in Red is my main flame
My heart of hearts tis her I claim

One Flew Over is a good sort
As is Doc Moose I will report

Some brothers Justin are just fine
While some we have yet to define

Beware the potato E. Fudd
Cause he's one crazy deranged spud

As a whole the toons are left field
It's best if you leave their doors sealed

And as for our dear Nurse Cratchet
Drinking's become her new habit

Others you'll meet, given the time
One by one as you read their rhyme

So to you "Welcome to the 'Stute"
I'm glad to see another coot.

PS.  You wouldn't happen to have a fresh pack of crayons on ya? I'm stating to run out of Red and my life size portrait of Lady is only have done.  I also see you stopped by the kitchen… mystery head goo-stew… not bad if you don't mind not knowin' who your sitting down to dinner with.  Makes it hard for conversation.  Feel free to drop by anytime… and ah… don't forget the crayons next time.  Thanks.

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