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Fear
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Fear |
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Jone Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 41 |
Fear controls us. It controls our words, It controls our actions, It controls our lives. We try new things, But we can't, We fear. You fear change, Fear vulnerability, Fear Fear. Tonight I missed. I missed out on a great, Wonderful, Amazing opportunity, That I have been waiting, Waiting for over three years to gain. I missed her, I feared, I feared her words, Her rejection, Her amazingness, My expectations. Had I not feared, I would have known. I could have lived, I could have loved, I could have been, Been with her. But i feared. It was once said; The only thing we have to fear, Is fear itself. I fear, fear. I love. I lost. I never gained. I feared... |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Nothing is ever lost until you give up trying.....excellent work...enjoyed it.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Excellent! We fear the unknown but we have to have faith to take that leap in the dark. Wonderful things happen when we don't let fear over take us. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Fear can be such a pain in the *** can't it? But we all must leanr not to let fear control our lives, because if it does, we miss out on a lot of great things! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good point in this nicely written poem!  |
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