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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-01-13 06:49 PM


Do you ever stop and think about-
The things we used to do?
When you were so in love with me,
And I in love with you.

The world was ripe for plucking
And from nothing did we shrink-
Those really were some glorious times
Do you ever stop and think?

Remember all the hard times?
All those hours that I worked...
Herding some man’s cattle-
And my duties never shirked

You’d have my supper waiting-
When I came in after dark.
Just digging through old memories
Still fans to life a spark...

A spark of love we used to have
Which was a raging flame..
It’s now a bed of ashes...
I don’t know just who’s to blame.

It really dosen’t matter though-
These partings really stink...
I believe our love could still survive-
Do you ever stop and think?


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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-13 07:09 PM


Some things are worth some serious thought, aren't they? Wonderful, touching poem...

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-01-13 08:44 PM


Enjoyed this, Gunslinger. Your work always gives one pause. Seems many of us spend much time in reflection.

*As always, impeccable sense of rhythm and rune.

Dear LadyClaire


Grandma Jo
Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51

3 posted 2000-01-13 08:57 PM


I really love this, makes me realize that we all should stop and think sometimes. Thanks for the thought of it!  
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