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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Let me kiss you behind your ear Whisper words only you can hear Of how I tremble knowing you’re near Let me kiss you, my love. Let me see your eyes as you look at me Show me desire and don’t hide your need And I will answer your silent plea Let me see you, my love. Let me touch you on your sweet chest Nuzzle a place for my head to rest Give your pulse rate a bit of stress Let me touch you, my love. Let me smell your heated skin I’ll savor your scent and we can pretend That this dance we’ve begun will never end Let me smell you, my love. Let me taste you, I’ll beg for more I want to absorb you through every pore And take you into my very core Let me taste you, my love. Let me hear your soft moans of delight As we love each other through the long night To collapse, exhausted, at dawn’s first light Let me hear you, my love. Let me love you through all my days I promise I’ll please you in so many ways My dearest wishes this request conveys Let me love you, my love. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Suthern! And a bit steamy! No guy in his right mind would turn down a request like that! Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
DANNNNNGGGG Girlfriend! It got hot in here all of a sudden! Woo Hoooo! I love it! Tell it like it IS!  Printing..... It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a delight to the senses. Great poem, Suthern...yeah, it is getting hot in here ain't it?  Michael |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Steamy? Hot? From lil ole me? *G* (innocently polishing halo) Thank you Denise, Caroline, and Michael... very much!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is so beautiful suthern....and you've raised the temperature here too.....I love it!! Exquisite writing..Saving this.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well suthern this poem was certainly worth a walk to the library...lol and no comments that a woman my age could use the exercise lol this is beautiful, one of the most purest reflections of love I have read....simply beautiful |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'll sneak in here and do a ditto...beautiful.. HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, dear ladies! *S* And Lovey... I've seen pictures of your legs and see mine every day and I'm older than you... I wouldn't even THINK about making any such comments!! *G* |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well, well, well... My dear Lady Suthern I must say I'm feeling rather flush. Very sensual… very physical… the poetic equivalent of a banana split with chocolate syrup, whip cream, nuts, sprinkled candies and a cherry topper. Quite edible and very delicious! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Pretty damn brilliant for a blonde don't ya think? And from Louisiana too?....Okay, so she's gotta big heart, brains and good looks?....what's the big deal?....Balladeer has gray hair?.....LongJohn has a big gut?.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Andrew: All that??? *G* I'm impressed! Thank you! And Toe: Blonde or not, I'm smart enough to recognize near perfection (there is that patience thang! LOL) Thanks, sweetie... to even be mentioned in the same post as LJA and Balladeer is an honor. *G* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great poem from a southern belle. Well written Liz |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yep! All that, and more! If ya didn't notice from the icon... I reached such a degree as to melt all away. And now I'm just a big gooey mess on the floor. (And with that said, here comes the pitch right over the plate.... ) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Belle *Perk* You've seen Lovey's legs??? In peekshures???? I wanna see! I wanna see!!! Incidently, this poem was truly beautiful, and so well thought out. This was easily as moving as your poem about your Dad and Mom, which I will never forget. You are such an incredible lady! Toe - She's got my heart and brains now??? I thought she said you had them!! I really AM confused now. I hate it when my heart and brains get passed around like this. I want them back! *tapping toe impatiently* psst, Belle - yanno, speaking of peekshures, when are you gonna include yours with your wonderful poetry? I think all of the PiP-ers in here oughta DEMAND a peekshure of Belle! [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Elizabeth: Thank you very much! Andrew: A perfect setup... I can hear the crack of the bat and see the ball sailing far over left field for a sure home run... but to take that swing... nope, nope, nope. *G* I'll behave... sorta. *G* LJA: You'll have to ask the lady. *G* As for your heart and brains... You STAY confused! LOL I sure don't have them... unless you're blonde? LOL. Guess you lost them completely (if indeed they were actually yours? *G*) Thanks, sailor... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
M'Lady... I expected no less from one such as yourself. It's those unsavory types whom shall remain unmentioned that I have concern for. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Yeah! Me too, Andrew. Those rascally scalawags are definitely unsavory. I agree with you... (err, ahh, you weren't talking about ME, were you????) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ah me good man LJ... never you fret me'hardy... for I'll not speak ill of the likes of you, but more the shade of the three-legged bilge rat who dines on the refuse of poetic dregs. Me thinks you know the scalawag of whom I refer (wink, wink). |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A lovely, sensual and sweetly erotic poem Southern. I enjoyed the read. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Aye, that I do, Andrew, me lad. An' he's a ne'er do well type if'n I ever has seen wan. The poor lass, she's all in tissie o'er him, too. Such a shame. Such a loss. tsk tsk |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well what shall I say...blushing? I'm not sure if I should read such poetry (lol) I might get addicted Nice poem, so light but yet so deep I'm sure to miss such love must make someone weep The lines add up to ecstasy Well written shall I say to thee. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, Martie, for the kind comments... Helmut, for the lovely poem... and a couple of scalawags (remaining nameless to protect the guilty! *G*) for the smiles! *S* You've all been so very kind... and I appreciate that very much! Thank you... and g'nite! *S* |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Yeah, I knew you were trying to dry out the bayou Auntie ... and you're making your nephew read erotic poetry ?? [innocent look] ... tsk, tsk !! A superb piece ... SMOOCHES ...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern - Softly spoken sultry steamy super sexy Smiles ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
hi suthern, so glad i caught up with this one. this is more than steamy, it is a beautiful moment of love well written. excellent care you put into this, very sensuous. rus |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now Froggie... did I MAKE you read anything? *G* Smooches, dearie... and thank you! Marge & Rus: Thank you very much for the read and the kind words! *S* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Suthern, what a great piece of work this is....and you are. That cool, calm exterior on the outside and a steamy swamp of sensuality on the inside!! Whew! You are way too good for Toe....but, if you insist of writing this kind of poem for him, at least name it "Ode to a Toe'd".  Great writing, girl! |
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