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Always There Inside
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Always There Inside |
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TomS Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 32 |
Always There Inside What is it felt inside A need that cuts so deep While on my lonely ride Her company I seek In my head always Has always been there Will search all my days For love so fair My heart crying out A man¹s life I lead Searching about In such wanton need Cutting through my heart Through my flesh Till breath does part Searching for loves refresh |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous, Tom! The yearning in this comes through loud and clear! Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great , I can feel your longing , well done  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this a lot Tom...it shows your longing well |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seek and you shall find.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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