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Heartbreak |
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Vaneet Randhawa New Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 5California |
Heartbreak I look at you standing there, So clueless, not knowing that I care. Whenever I see you, I feel the burst, Just wishing that to you I am first. Don't you know? Don't you realize? It is you, and only you, that I prize? Your eyes deep brown, and so intense Deepens me, but there's a fence That blocks my way to get to you. A fence so strong it makes me blue. I can never love a person so great As you, my love, my heartbreak. |
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Femme's Father Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 58Carrollton, TX, USA |
Excellent thoughts-- I too have that T-shirt. Many times in my younger days, my heart would yearn for a girl that I thought was soo beautiful- and they did not even know I felt this way. It was so heartbreaking and I could not understand why they could not feel what I felt --wow, it was so strong! But it went away finally,somewhat..best of luck to you in your search.. james david |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful , Those feelings that are unreconised one day will be ,keep searching  |
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