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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2000-01-07 08:15 AM


It's me! It's me! I swear its true.
I've finally returned to you.

I've been gone for so darn long.
I don't even feel like I belong.

But soon I will and that's a fact.
(What a crappy poem to bring me back)

I've missed you all more then you know.
And yes I even missed you Toe.

So challenge me.. I need to write.
I've been getting to much sleep at night.  

Oh, and fill me in, what's goin on?
What happened here since I've been gone.



 With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

© Copyright 2000 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-01-07 08:17 AM


LOL!

and it isn't crappy Lucie   hehe - welcome back!!

(Don't go away again OK?)

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 2000-01-07 08:26 AM


Hi ya Lucie!!! How in the fu...um, how in the hell are ya?...Yep, you've been missed fersure! Balladeer's been talking bad about ya but other than that...just a bunch of fine poetry and new poets and nan gotta a big eraser and LongJohn and Dr. Moose had an affair and Ron's having a sex change operation and Martie's been smoking sage and of course, I've just kinda sat back quietly, (you know me..always a little shy and "stand-offish") and, in fact...I'm really the only person here that's behaved....
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
3 posted 2000-01-07 08:28 AM


Oh....and ya said ya wanted a challenge?..Okay..here's the first line..you take it from here:

When ya swim in the creek,
And an eel bites your cheek,
That's "a moray".....

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 01-07-2000).]

Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
4 posted 2000-01-07 09:43 AM


Hello Lucie,
  I'm new since you've been gone,
   not Ricky Ricardo but welcome home!
  I guess this does not make much sense,
  but sure you'll give us new folk a chance    
             Paul



[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-07-2000).]

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
5 posted 2000-01-07 09:47 AM


Paul...are you ever in for a treat when this lady gets wound up!!!!
LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
6 posted 2000-01-07 09:54 AM


Loosey, err, Lucie!  Welcome back, ya lil tease!  We've all missed your razor-sharp wit and light-hearted spirit.  Watch out for Paul (still waters run deep, yanno).  As for Nan's eraser, it is one of them electric kinds, and... yes... she's already "violated" her warranty.

Toe - lmao@moray - now I've got THAT song humming along in my mind on autopilot.

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
7 posted 2000-01-07 10:03 AM


Welcome Back, Lucie!!!! And Toe tells the truth... he did behave most of the time... (Thank heavens that was due to lack of computer access rather than a reformation of attitude! *G*)

ROFL @ a moray.... At least it's a change from singing Leavin' on a Jet Plane! LOL

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
8 posted 2000-01-07 10:07 AM


LongJohn,,,,I think it was by the Mama's and Papa's?....LOL
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
9 posted 2000-01-07 10:09 AM


Hiya Lucie!!  
So great to see you back!  
We missed you gal!!

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-01-07 10:25 AM


Welcome back Lucie! Yes, you were missed! Love your poem, it's cute!  

 Denise


LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
11 posted 2000-01-07 10:44 AM


Toe - lol@Mamas and Papas - I guess lil Lucie headed over to the naughty-girl room
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
12 posted 2000-01-07 12:00 PM


Welcome Home Lucie...You have been sorely missed girl! These boys need to be put in their place. Suthern was right about the behavior, Toe has had limited computer access therefore they have been well behaved...lol. I think this place needs to be shook up a bit in this new millenium. Shall we have a go?

Toe...lmao@moray

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