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Richard
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since 1999-12-27
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California

0 posted 1999-12-27 09:41 PM


  

  Oh do they have a way
  Dreams and fantasies of love
  So true and so real
  Distance apart is none
  We love as if
  Our bodies are one
  How real our love is
  


© Copyright 1999 Richard - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-12-27 09:51 PM


Real love survives everything, Richard. Short but sweet.

Elizabeth

 "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke
Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."



Georgia
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since 1999-12-22
Posts 32

2 posted 1999-12-27 09:52 PM


richard...that is really deep... are you speaking from experience..? would like to see you write more...
Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-27 09:52 PM


Welcome to Passions, Richard! I guess fantasies are real in a sense. Never thought of it that way before!  

 Denise



Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
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4 posted 1999-12-27 10:02 PM


Welcome to Passions, Richard.  Love is also bittersweet.

 B Gravitt



Georgia
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since 1999-12-22
Posts 32

5 posted 1999-12-27 10:13 PM


richard, was really hoping this would be a creation in magic..its truly a  work of art..fun type poem...


 

Poet deVine
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6 posted 1999-12-27 10:45 PM


Welcome to the family! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you!  

Nan
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7 posted 1999-12-27 11:40 PM


Welcome, welcome, welcome....

Richard
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 35
California
8 posted 1999-12-28 12:14 PM


Thank you Georgia. I appreciate.
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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9 posted 1999-12-28 05:50 AM


Welcome to Passions...

    

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL
10 posted 1999-12-28 08:14 AM


Enjoyed Richard.....are you who I think you might be??
Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
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11 posted 1999-12-28 09:39 AM


Richard,
This was a sweet poem, I enjoyed it very much, I look forward to reading more of your works soon.

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
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Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
12 posted 1999-12-28 11:02 AM


Welcome to Passions, Richard. This is very good.  Well done.

 Jim

"If I rest, I rust." - Martin Luther


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
13 posted 1999-12-28 11:30 AM


I think this is one a lot of us can relate to...welcome to passions  
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
14 posted 1999-12-28 11:36 AM


Welcome to the Passionate Forums.  
Richard
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 35
California
15 posted 1999-12-28 12:23 PM


As a new member I am still stumbing through the navigation process, so please forgive my tardiness in responding to your kind comments. I thank you all and am looking forward to reading your work.
Richard

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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16 posted 1999-12-28 12:36 PM


And we are looking forward to reading more of yours,
Welcome
Liz

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
17 posted 1999-12-28 04:59 PM


Isnt real love such a blessing?  Such as your poem is!  Great job!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

18 posted 1999-12-28 05:05 PM


Richard,A very deep poem, enjoyed it much. looking forward to reading more.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming
19 posted 1999-12-28 06:21 PM


Well done Richard.  Welcome to Passions.
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
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20 posted 1999-12-28 06:25 PM


I can relate to it.  Extremely lovely.

~Astraea

"Charms strike the sight but merit wins the soul."


Mark R.
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.
21 posted 1999-12-28 06:27 PM


Welcome to our family.  Enjoyed your poem, and hope to see more soon.  My poems just seem to annoy people, but I like them.  Yours, on the other hand had a comforting feel to it.  Thanks for sharing.  
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