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The Windmaker
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The Windmaker |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
The Windmaker The Windmaker knocks A cruel hand at my door And howls when I whisper No more. I live without terror In no man's house. Windmaker, Away from my door. You needn't come for me, I shan't be your slave, There are things I must do once more. Windmaker, be on your way My old friend You'll frighten me Nevermore. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! I like this very much! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I too like this! Great work! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Nice job mama duck, keep posting  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful, Well done  |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Hey Quackk Quackk, I'm not 100% sure I understood who or what you were talking about. But as we know that's not always important with good poetry and this sure is. I read it 4 times and I'm gonna read it again. Later, Paul |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great job! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Thanks for the input on Windmaker. Paul, I am not 100% sure who the Windmaker is, either. All I know is that sometimes he/she haunts me and I've figured how to scare him off. Chris |
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