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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
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Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 2000-01-02 02:42 PM


Old Photo Albums
by ©Richard Budig 2000


House empty, house quiet . . .
where have all the children gone?
Grown and moved away, old woman,
gone and left their trash behind . . .
broken promises strewn about
like so many dog poop stains
on the pricey carpet they said
they would keep safe from the beast.
Go look at old photo albums, woman.
Look at the pictures and see them
before they took away your power.
Or was it that you abdicated?
Children can’t take power.
Someone has to give it to them.
Someone who doesn’t care anymore.
Someone who no longer believes.
And what was it about you, old woman,
that killed your belief in yourself?

© Copyright 2000 broker6 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-02 04:24 PM



Very sad. Well written.

 Denise


Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-01-02 04:47 PM


An intriguing glimpse into a sad story. Would love to "hear" more.
mama duck
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since 1999-12-31
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Northern California
3 posted 2000-01-02 06:50 PM


So, so sad. Is all of life a tragedy with only split seconds of bliss? Something very important has been lost, and yet I know can be found. Keep writing, keep seraching. Thanks for the thought provoking poem. Chris
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
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4 posted 2000-01-02 11:37 PM


Well said Mama Quack Quack,theres something much deeper here,thanks for sharing.
whiskey
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5 posted 2000-01-03 03:22 AM


Very sad , Well written  
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
6 posted 2000-01-04 11:03 AM


very well said!!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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