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When did you stop loving me?
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When did you stop loving me? |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
When did you stop loving me and take hold of another's hand, When did love that seemed so strong begin to weaken and go so wrong When did our love begin to fade going from sunshine into the shade, When the other became your shining star I the one you saw from afar, A heart badly broken, without ever mending betrayed by a love that was only pretending gone now our times of enchantment leaving only feelings abandonment Alone now I walk, true feelings to hide trying to save my wounded pride tears all gone, they've all been cried something inside me recently died Now, sitting here, unable to feel you gone, me wondering what's real and so, I ask, one final plea When did you stop loving me? < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 02-07-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was beautiful Danny...if she left dear, she's the one losing out and you deserve far better!!!! Keep your spirits up hun!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Very nicely written. I have wonder the same thing myself. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Danny, very touching. Very sad. Hope it works out.  -SEA |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
...Alone now I walk, true feelings to hide... That line really jolted me. Very emotional piece and very well written. beautiful! (i found it! ) |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
i went through this when i had my heart broken last year. its an awful feeling, but self love and time heals all wounds.. i hope you feel better soon! =) |
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