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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-02-04 12:41 PM



Farewell old Friend
   ~~~~~~~~~~~~

Alone  I  scale
a  mountain  peak
the  face  shear  straight  and  cruel
the  fear  of  height  is  paramount
causation  my  only  tool
~
My  friend  is  safely
on  the  ground
in  essence  by  my  side
with  beckoning  words  distracting  me
at  each  painful  step  I  rise
~
It  took  a  year
to  clamber  here
atop  the  first  plateau
the  essence  of  my  friend  is  still
just  on  the  ledge  below
~
The  cosmos
I've  ascended  to
and  stopped  to  reminisce
gives  time  to  bid  my  friend  farewell
his  essence  now  rarely  missed
~
As  I  press  on
to  gain  the  peak
a  sound  haunts  from  afar
it  rises  up  the  distant  slopes
from  my  friend ...
my  last  cigar





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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-04 12:58 PM


Gave up smoking, Rex?! Good for you! Maybe someday I will have the courage to scale that mountain!
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-02-04 11:37 PM


Over a year now and its still a battle

Rex

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-02-05 12:17 PM


Once again, you have cheered me up, my new friend.  But don't ask me to give up MY cigars.  We WOULD have our first fight!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-02-05 12:41 PM


I like your style
Good poem
Liz

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2000-02-06 08:34 AM


Thanks Elizabeth and serenity
theres not a day goes by
that I don't miss
a good
smoke

Rex}<((((o>

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