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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-02-04 12:46 PM


Open your eyes and you may not see clearly
Open your ears and you may not hear clearly
Open your heart and you will see blindly
Open your mind and you will see only what you want to see
but open your soul and it will lead you where you want to go.

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Shelley
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1 posted 2000-02-04 01:21 AM


Stunning! I really enjoyed reading this.

How well it speaks the truth!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-02-04 01:36 AM


I enjoyed this, too. Some of it's almost bitter, though really hard-won experience. Whatever difference that makes.

Mike

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3 posted 2000-02-04 01:41 AM


Glad to read your poems again, whiskey.  Again, another lovely poem.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-04 09:52 AM


This one say so much with few words! Very good, Whiskey!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-02-04 09:59 AM


Perfect Zen whiskey!!!!  Beautiful!  
Paul Hoekman
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6 posted 2000-02-04 10:25 PM


SIMPLY SAID!
nice whiskers

SEA
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7 posted 2000-02-04 10:36 PM


Whiskey, this is really very good, I agree with you! Enjoyed this read! -SEA
WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-02-04 10:39 PM


WOW! I liked this, my kind of thing! So very true it is!  Are you aware we have a spiritual forum also?

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Echo Rhayne
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9 posted 2000-02-04 10:51 PM


Short sweet and to the point.  I like this a lot!  I am going to miss your poetry while I am gone!  Take care of yourself ok!?!

 Just be glad I'm not your child!  *evil grin*



[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 02-04-2000).]

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2000-02-05 12:08 PM


I feel like you wrote it just for me.  I SO
needed to read this tonight.  Thank you, O Wise One.

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-02-05 01:29 AM


Wonderful little poem with much wisdom
Liz

Corinne
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12 posted 2000-02-05 03:29 AM


You nailed this one right on the head, my friend!


Corinne

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