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Soleil
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since 1999-06-12
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0 posted 2000-02-03 10:24 PM


The Greatest Reverence Is Due Children)

Here is one come to confound
My conceit;
A poor Man's Fancy now fixed.
Faeries fly in at the window
Casting nativity aside
As heaven, air and sea
Are taxed by foul words fallen.
And that being said, middle true
With no moral whatsoever
First consider oneself
A few tousand years sooner
And when the fog lays low upon
The foreign hills
It is then the turnings caught.
But by some small act
The children there could not be.
For in due time is everyone
A contradiction
And in reality
A golden cloud cape prediction.
For there comes a change
In reverence given
That makes a subtle difference
And allows the waiting sacred circle
And therein the morning's journey.

Whither we go, who can tell?
  



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Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
1 posted 2000-02-03 11:03 PM


I'm a bit confused here....you may need to explain this to me???  Has this anything to do with how we're all caught in the middle of heaven and hell?  Or the children have no future because of this and the way we've taken for granted all that lies beyond...somehow??  

Yikes, I must be tired cause I'm LOST!!!! Somehow I have a feeling I'm WAY off here. hmmmmmmm.....
Pondering...which means I liked it!! hehehe

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