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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
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0 posted 2000-02-01 09:09 PM


I am about to
B
R
  E
   A
    K and fall apart
I need to be held t    g    t     e
                     o    a    h     r  
Cause I am scared
I will fall into shattered

    P
        I     E

           C
                 E      
            s!    
                

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-02-01 09:32 PM



   H
    O
     W

        A
         D     B
          O  A   L
           R       E




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Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-01 09:40 PM


I agree with Marge!! Adorable!!          

Denise


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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2000-02-01 09:46 PM


LOL... well, not necessarily funny, but I love the expressive format!!
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
4 posted 2000-02-01 09:55 PM


I'm going to start singing Patsy Cline's "I fall to pieces" (already doing it )~
That was very creative~
Really enjoyed it~
Marie~  

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