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Balladeer's Bible Babes
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Balladeer's Bible Babes |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I saw a great white master, His verbage was quite clear, He came a little closer and He whispered in my ear. He said he was a preacher, His name he never said. He offered me a place where, I always would be fed. I thought about his offer, You see my life's been rough. 'Cause he was a peacher man, I thought I'd call his bluff. He took me to this hotel, Where I was bathed and fed. He gave me some new clothing, I slept in a warm, soft bed. He talked about my savior, A price I had to pay. He asked me if I would go, Or if I had to stay? Stay I did, I tell you, He had me on a hook. If I left where would I go? My heart he all but took. Now listen to me ladies, Now listen to me gals. I'm making lots of money, Dancin' for his pals. Be aware of preachers, Of one be so afriad. He is such a master, And he MUST be obeyed. The sign outside his haven, The one that has me caged. The sign that is a becon, Says, "Balladeer's Bible Babes". Well Mike I finally worte it. Did I do good master??? *adoring look*...lol [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 02-01-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is great Marilyn!  lololI can hardly wait for 'Deer's reply!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Marilyn, you're getting better every day ! What do you think....would he want to be my Valentine ?  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ROFLMBO!!! Hey Bal- How much you charge to watch your "babes???" Good one Marilyn!!! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
LOL... well done Marilyn!!! Of course you know you are just asking for it with this one. Have fun on the stage! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn- Wonderful. YOU GO 'BABE' ! Balladeer will be ready with a reply, of that I'm sure. Can't wait ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Take cover Marilyn, it's coming...how'd ya think up Bible babes? haha |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I was really suspicious about what he was doing with all that free time of his.... Now I know... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Thanks everyone. This was a blast to write. Andrew...I like the stage...lol Rebecca...Mike and I were talking about a month back. "DE's Travelling Salvation Show" came up in the conversation. Some how Mike threw Balladeer's Bible babes out and I told him I had to write that one. Well after all this time here it is...lol. nan...How do you think he could afford that new car??...lol |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi Marilyn I detect a slightly devious smile behind this poem Being new here I guess I need a bit of time to adjust to the jest of things Rex }<{{{{o> |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh my....are you Balladeer's babe now good Lady Marilyn. Lots of crushed hearts at that news. Great showing by the way. I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Marilyn, not that you've let our secret out, I guess I have to respond and give you the credit you so righteously deserve Great work, lady!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... and she looks so sweet and innocent! LOL. Great job, Marilyn... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marilyn, I read Balladeers answer before I read your poem. Now I understand. You did a wonderful job but beware the preacher man. He has a mind like a brainpan. Once he dips his pen and the oil begins to flow. You never know where he'll hit, high or low. *L* Sy |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Rex..there is nothing slight about this devious smile!  Sir Knight..I don't know how many will be crushed but thanks. Mike....Gee thanks..I think.  suthern..I AM sweet and innocent!! Sy....I am not afraid of Mike. what can a bunch of hot air do??..lol |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFLMAO |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
LOL Good one Maz Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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