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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 2000-02-01 07:44 AM


The mists of memory, enshroud-
The tangled corridors-
Of the heart, and the mind,
That you once claimed were yours.
A sullen stream of tears run down-
Dank, depressing air....
Where never smile or laugh is found
A labyrinth of despair.
Ah, the light which once was here...
The laughter, bright and gay...
Alas, too soon they disappeared
And darkness came to stay.
The dreams which wafted like a scent
Of rose or daffodils-
On bitter gales away they went...
In vain I hunt them still...
Ah, wretch, methinks thy reason’s flown-
Perhaps indeed ‘tis true...
Like you, I know not where it’s gone,
I miss the both of you.


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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
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1 posted 2000-02-01 07:56 AM


so sad in it's beauty.  I do so enjoy reading your works!
Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-01 11:42 AM


Very sad  

Denise

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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3 posted 2000-02-01 11:59 AM


~sigh~  You can feel the sadness here, slinger.  
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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4 posted 2000-02-01 01:55 PM


You know...I'm wondering if this was written "to" someone else or "to" the writer himself? (I mean, as in "perspective"...) Either way, it works, and so effectively, Gunslinger. I like this different bend. (nearly as much as your traditional stuff!)  

Claire

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