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Just After The Laundry Mat
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Just After The Laundry Mat |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Today While washing my clothes A young newlywed couple Left the laundrymat together The sweet new bride Pulling a laundry cart Was smiling They smiled at each other Her new husband gave the cart A little kick Then a giggle. [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What is this? The new Toerag? The "hey look at me I'm a real guy with feelings and not the bully that kicks around Balladeer and LongJhn all the time" Toerag? HRMPH!! We'll see. You should stick with this style. It suits you......and you do it well, my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahhhh... if only the days when anything done together is a celebration would last. *S* Well done, Toe!! |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
I do like this, and also hope to see a few more such vignettes from you. It helps remind me I should be watching people with more attention and more affection every day. Thanks, Toerag. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How domestic of you, Toe...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL!!! Rest assured that smile won't remain there long!! haha... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so sweet--I am watching all the time for this stuff--missed this one. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Toe, this is very sweet! Letting the reader see inside of us is usually when we are at our best, don't you think? Corinne |
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