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Paul Hoekman
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0 posted 1999-12-29 01:16 PM


  I had a dream
just the other day
we were flying around
in my fathers plane.

  Down to the shore
we plunged into the sea
found a big old whale
asked about a manatee
before it could answer heard a whaling ship
then tale turned it faded away,the final words that we heard "I really don't want to die today".

  We banked around some coral right through a school of whispering fish, heard something about an octopus and a whales dying wish.

  We broke the surface headed straight for the sky, landed on Mars just to watch the stars go by.

  But the air got thin so we headed home had no problem went through the ozone hole.

  We were flying around in my fathers plane tip top flip flop here we go again from the top the front drops and dives into the sea and straight up to the moon,be back to earth real soon. Just a little daydream.                              



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Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 1999-12-29 07:09 PM


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Meadowmuse
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2 posted 1999-12-29 07:20 PM


I enjoyed your daydream...the elements of sea and sky always pull at me, perhaps from my days as a mermaiden. {blink}
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 1999-12-29 07:29 PM


You have a good imagination!

 Nathan

Astraea
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4 posted 1999-12-29 07:33 PM


Very nice.  Daydreams are a nice thought.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


whiskey
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5 posted 1999-12-29 07:40 PM


Wonderful Day dream, your Imagination must be strong  
Poet deVine
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6 posted 1999-12-29 08:21 PM


Nice daydream!  

Nan
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7 posted 1999-12-29 09:28 PM


Here ya go.... take another glide around.....
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 1999-12-30 05:05 AM


Hey ok, are you sneaking into my daydreams now??? LoL, So close to a few I have had =o)


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Paul Hoekman
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9 posted 2000-01-04 08:53 PM


Alot of dreamin going on up here, had to come back to join them.
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