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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
don't you see why your life's a mess? don't you see why you hurt? don't you see that there's some things you can't control? don't you see your love is gone? don't you see that you were wrong? don't you see that some wounds may not ever mend? don't you see the pain you cause? don't you see how much they hurt? don't you see that your actions roar far more than words? don't you see you can't buy love? don't you see why you fail? don't you see with lies and abuse you won't ever prevail? this was written for someone i know who is usuin' my beau...it was writen on Jan. 25, 2000, my first posted poem of the millenium. < !signature--> "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me [This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 01-26-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Abagail, I love it. Very very good!  -SEA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
People like this may sometimes seem to prevail but they won't forever. Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A gail of hail Abagail, Well done. |
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