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whiskey
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0 posted 1999-12-29 09:55 AM


  "My dream of you "

I long to feel you close and near
To whisper sweet things in your ear
To tell you all the things you do
and fill you in on dreams of you

Your touch to feel on my skin
To feel that deep warmth within
To see a smile upon your face
Will take me to that special place

I can then hold you close
and tell you of this love I boast
To feel your kiss on my lips
will bring me sweet  happiness bliss

© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 1999-12-29 09:58 AM


This is beautiful.
whiskey
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2 posted 1999-12-29 07:20 PM


Thanks dreamer  
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 1999-12-29 07:43 PM


Yes indeed, this is beautiful! Keep writing beautiful poems like this one.

 Nathan

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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-12-29 08:17 PM


A beautiful dream! A lovely poem!  

highwayman
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5 posted 1999-12-30 04:07 AM


It is a wonderfull poem whiskey.  love to think that this one might have been for me.  Love  lots!

 

Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 1999-12-30 07:31 AM


Beautiful Whiskey!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


whiskey
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7 posted 1999-12-30 08:32 AM


Highwayman  This is written for you who else your my man
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