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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Don't want to know How and why we went wrong this way, This hurts me so bad, The heart dies, And question myself why, It's fair to fel so hurt When you had to leave me And left me alone to get hurt Inside mt boby, I feel weak, Don't have answers to say to you, But I feel It was my mistake That I let you go, It feels so hurt, So hurt inside, Don't want to feel how, I can explain any words To feel how I am, Waiting to see how days will go by, It hurts so much , to see you go, And never say where and when you will return in my arms again |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Vandana  Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
So sad indeed [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Vandana, yes very sad. *hugs* Sad, but a great poem =) ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I'm sorry you feel this way, but I know exactly where you are coming from. You might want to consider posting this one on Dark Passions. Well done. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
vandana, Beautiful again Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So sad and beautiful. |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
"The heart dies..." I loved this one, so sad... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana, A strong and emotional poem, well done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vandana- Another nice one for sure. And, hon ... when you least expect it the heart stops hurting. Love ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So very sad |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent strong emotions on display here, Vandana |
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