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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-21 07:12 PM


Let us share a sunset
a smile
a walk along the shore
hand in hand
feeling between our toes
the warmth of sand

Look into my eyes
yet see into my soul
say no words
just offer me your love
and accept the love
from my heart

As we watch the sun
melt into the sea
and feel the chill
of the evening air
softly brush back
a strand of my hair

Slowly kiss me
underneath the stars of heaven
and know without question
I love you
as I have loved you
for all time.

For my love, Jon.

                 -SEA-

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-21 07:21 PM


SEA-

This is refreshingly lovely.
Jon ... is very fortunate to
have such expressive feelings
emitted from your heart.

~*Marge*~



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2 posted 2000-01-21 07:24 PM


WHAT A SWEET AND LOVING POEM.
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3 posted 2000-01-21 07:28 PM


Marge.... I'm the lucky one. He is my everything  

Martie..... Thank you!

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4 posted 2000-01-21 07:32 PM


I like poems I can envision in my head.. I could smell the sea and see the stars .... nice poem  
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5 posted 2000-01-21 11:25 PM


Ahh..love does bring out the best in us, doesn't it?  This is truly lovely, I enjoyed it!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


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6 posted 2000-01-22 09:12 AM


I only hope you shared this with him  
Nicole
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7 posted 2000-01-22 11:31 AM


Yes, must share must share!!  Beautiful poem!



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

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8 posted 2000-01-22 12:50 PM


This is so lovely, SEA! Just beautiful!

Denise


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Hoot,Satiate.... He is my husband! Of course I shared it with him!    He is so wonderful. I'm a lucky gal. My first husband beat the stuffing out of me. I've known Jon since I was 14. -SEA

Denise... Glad you liked it!   -SEA

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10 posted 2000-01-24 01:21 AM


HUMUNGOUS SIGH!

hhhhHHHAAAAAAHHHhhhhhhh
So sweet
from
SEA to shining SEA
very nice

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11 posted 2000-01-24 01:25 AM


I hope Jon recognizes that his soul mate may be standing right in front of him
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