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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
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Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-28 09:48 PM


you have someone dont you?
everyone has someone dont they?
there is something beyond the pain
isnt there?
your not answering
am i asking the right questions
or are you giving me silent answers
to ease my mind
perhaps im not hearing you
like you need me too
or my life is over
and someone forgets to tell me
that ive been left behind to wait..


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Denise
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1 posted 1999-12-28 11:07 PM


Oh so sad.   Well written too, Jackal.

 Denise



Tamera
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 121

2 posted 1999-12-29 12:30 PM


very sad, there is something behind the pain, I promise..it is there..
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
3 posted 1999-12-29 12:44 PM


Lovely.  Just not-at-all-plainly lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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4 posted 1999-12-29 02:27 AM


I enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece... and no, everyone "doesn't" have someone...{sigh}
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA
5 posted 1999-12-29 07:20 AM


I'll answer you when someone answers me ok?  Maybe we are just asking the wrong questions *shrugs* who knows


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


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