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Collision of Souls |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
There are so many people who enter our lives, some do remain, others say their goodbyes. I look back on my life and I know what is true, this incredible friendship that I share with you. I want to thank you for the gift of your love, your kind gentle words, I've been blessed from above. I want to thank you for the secrets we share, and the laughter like two little girls without cares. I want to thank you for the knowledge you've shown, your wisdom has helped me face the unknown. I want to thank you for your strength and your voice, which you've given to me when I felt left without choice. I want to thank you for the strong shoulder I use, when I need to shed tears over battles I lose. Years have gone by and I want you to know, all you have given to me, I will never let go. I know that somehow we were meant to be, bestfriends to eachother, we are family. An unspoken truth keeps our journey alive, a song of true friendship, two souls who collide... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family, Tamara! This poem is fantastic! A wonderful tribute! And I love the title. Please let me know if you ever need anything!  |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very lovely. I always like the subject of best friends. I wish I could actually get the words down, like you have, to explain the connection between two people so close that you might as well call them family. Nicely done. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very beautiful, Welcome to a new member like myself. I look forward to reading more of your work  |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Thank you so much for the nice replies. I think I have found a wonderful family of writers.... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
A beautiful start, with hopefully more to come! Welcome to passions! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tamera - A warm welcome into our circle of friendship. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to friendship. Look forward to seeing more of your work. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You have found the best family of writers Tamera - and welcome to it! This is fantastic - truly beautiful - and reminds me of my own best friend. K...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very nice poem !! The title also caught my eye! I really liked it! You'll find the importance of a good title here soon enough! It's what "lures" someone in to actually read! You've certainly mastered that already! hehe Welcome to our home, I know you'll want to stay a long time! I too, look forward to reading more of your work!  - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem Tamera! You definitely have talent! Nathan |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful poems, wonderful tribute! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful tribute Welcome to passions |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful tribute to friendship. Welcome In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Nicely done... You may want to read my poem "Friend". It's waaaaay back but I think you would enjoy it's message. Welcome to passions ;-) Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Ha ha....I found your first post. This make me want to be your friend and I don't even know you....Wonderful piece I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Thank you again for welcoming me..I have been enjoying this so much, all the reading, and the sharing..I believe I have met another family, of another kind, so true to their spirit... |
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