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spiked
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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-01-15 12:17 PM


Kissing Pecks

Love is but a moment
Make of it what you can
A gentle kind of motion
The way you hold somebody’s hand.
To feel your breath along my neck,
To feel your lips in kissing pecks.
To know that you are wanted
And feel that need yourself.
For someone who can share with you
Your good times and your bad.
An unselfish kind of feeling
Where you matter less than they
Whose needs are more important,
And words cannot convey.
How warm a sense you have inside you
Each and everyday.
These words come from my feelings.
For I know of what I speak,
I feel, I need, I live and breath this feeling everyway.
It strikes me kind of funny
That you think of me as old.
For inside me is a child
With a passion strong and bold.
You only have one lifetime,
To find a love so true.
So I give everything I have to you




 Richard Rendall

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
1 posted 2000-01-15 12:48 PM


amazing! i loved it. i was there! i could totally feel the breath on my neck... hehe
wicked!

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-01-15 03:09 AM


Thank you Vixen

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 2000-01-16 02:45 PM


Exquisite work with this one, I enjoyed!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-16 03:58 PM


This is beautiful, Spiked! Great message, too!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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