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tears make your eyes shine |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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In times of sadness find your strength, for good things come in times of sorrow. a tear that finds your cheek today, will make you happier tomorrow. without these days that try your heart and bare the depths of tragedy the times that set our souls apart we would not be able to see. And when you find that you have found you’ve walked the extent of your line. You need but simply turn around for even tears make your eyes shine. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Kevin, Such a muse! I love even tears make your eyes shine. Rus |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it too.... Nice one, Kev...  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Words I've needed to hear lately, Kevin. Exellent work. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wonderful piece, lifts my spirits "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kevin, what a gentle and insightful poem. I like this very much!  Claire |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Gentle and wise words my friend. Beautifully done. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Kevin - This is lovely. What beautiful thoughts. 'for even tears make your eyes shine' What insight. You've sure penned a beauty here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
rus, its my favorite line too, glad you enjoyed it. HI nan hehe long time no hear from =) alz, same goes for you too where ya been hehe wondeful to hear fromyou has always claire get a new picture =) saxsoness, thanks for taking the time to read it, i hope it cheered you up what can i say michael, any positive coments from someone as good as you go a long way Marge your too quick for me lol! HI!!!! thanks for stoppin by hehe [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-14-2000).] |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow kev... ill definitly have to keep this poem in mind for next time i feel sad or lonely. definitly gives ya something to smile about! |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Well what can i say, a very beautiful poem that touched my heart. I loved this way this can be seen so clearly. A very talented man I see! |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i truly liked this one please feel free to keep up the good work merely_a_jester |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kevin I liked the message here...and very clearly expressed. James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This poem is so heartfelt, it reveals your sensitive side me thinks- nothing more romantic than that! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Uplifting poem , Wise words I like this alot Well done |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done oh Poet Kevin, You've certainly been blessed, With a knowledge that exceeds your years, This work is near your best. Sadly some of us have tears no more, The sparkle that's in my eyes, Is not from tears but many beers, I can no longer cry. After many years of let-downs, And screw ups left and right, I've only got myself to blame, For all the sleepless nights. If you keep up this wisdom, You show all us old farts here, You'll grow to be a marvel, LIke our old friend Balladeer. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I enjoy all of your poems ,but this is my favorite. It is certainly a beautiful thought well written Liz |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Vixen one smile on your face is enough to keep me writing forever Amber, im happy it meant alot to you Jester, of course ill try =) Devina, haha im all sensitive side....probably my downfall whiskey, hi pebbles =) thanks Toe, ill never be a balladeer =) but is that so bad =P Liz, not as much as i enjoy yours phew! |
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stephen j Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 21 |
great poem but i have 1 ques. how do you get the poem to repeat it self to keep comming at the top. |
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stephen j Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 21 |
great poem but i have 1 ques. how do you get the poem to repeat it self to keep comming at the top. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kevin, You are a wise old man, who writes great poetry. Parker |
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