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Merriment's Sway
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Merriment's Sway |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Merriment's Sway O Merriment, that toysome dame is in the hall gaily a-game upon a dance reports to sway now men of earnest will to play. Flowers adore her comely limbs and savour all through the place swims to each nosethirl and to bewray now men of earnest will to play. The glass is crowned, and blessed the ear with dreamcraft and bellies with cheer she stirs the spirits all the way now men of earnest will to play. A world it is to see her sport and souls her dainties and grace court marvel her jig, honour her lay now men of earnest will to play. |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
this is such a neat poem!! you've really done a great job playing with the words and telling a story at the same time. really incredible. [This message has been edited by rose (08-03-2003 09:45 AM).] |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Thank'ee rose--what a lovely name  I'm glad you enjoyed the read. |
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