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Taking Chance in October (c) Eliza Simmons, Sept 30, 2002

September, the sign of fall,
is soon to be passed away.
October, her sister,
is going to take place soon.
Old dreams seem to be too vague,
Too fragile for the cold wind.
New dreams seem to be too rare,
Too lost to be find in dust.
Same old dreams, I need to give it up.
I need to start a new trail.
The sun...seems to be...far away.
I'm getting... all cold,
Even sunlight seems like not enough.
Same old talks, but I can't find new dreams
When I'm chatting old dreams.

~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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