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Critical Analysis #2

The Merry Man

Teen14
Junior Member

since 2003-01-26

Posts 19

0 posted 2003-01-31 10:46 PM

He wanders down his merry street
Looking at all there is to see
The homes
The love
Oh how he loves it all
The richest man alive.
A spring in his step
A smile to every pet
There he is
The merry man.
His home is a mansion
Without any fashion
Just a little corner
Right by the street.
He's humble
He's kind
Spreading joy to every little girl and boy.
He has no toys
But has the joy
Of a thousand little girls and boys.
When the sun rises
So does he
When the sun sets
Never does he.
He doesn't ask a single task
Of anyone he meets
He just says "Hello!" to all on the passing street.
His riches are great
His money is fade
Just as his clothes.
The high life is his
The low life is theirs
To all who ignore the merry man
Walking down the street.

Teen14
Junior Member

since 2003-01-26

Posts 19

1 posted 2003-02-02 07:59 AM

Will someone please critque this poem???

Teen14
Junior Member

since 2003-01-26

Posts 19

2 posted 2003-02-04 06:09 PM

This poem has still not been critqued. Could someone please check it out and critique it for me??? Please?

Teen14
Junior Member

since 2003-01-26

Posts 19

3 posted 2003-02-12 03:36 PM

People people!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! C'mon, I want feedback!!! PLEASE CRITQUE THIS POEM!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!

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