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"Pretty In Pink"- A song I wrote today.
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"Pretty In Pink"- A song I wrote today. |
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xero_bebop New Member
since 2006-02-17
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I actually haven't decided what to call this, yet. Give me some ideas, of if you like "Pretty In Pink" then say that. COnstructive criticism appreciated. --- She's pretty in pink, doesn't know what to think Doesn't know what to think, oh no! And she walks around, like she's wearing a crown in a pretty pink gown, oh no! Her friends call her names behind her back She's a nice kid, just cut her some slack A misguided youth with good a good outlook It'd help, though, if she'd pick up a book She's Pretty neat, gliding on her feet It's got me beat, oh no! She's pretty cool, but she plays the fool not to sound too cruel, oh no! As she walks down the hall heads turn as she walks past them all hearts burn But hey... hey WHAT CAN I SAY She's pretty in pink, doesn't know what to think Doesn't know what to think, oh no! And she walks around, like she's wearing a crown in a pretty pink gown, oh no! Oh no! Oh no! Oh! (Tim T. 2006) |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
How about calling it "Think Pink" or "Pink Think"... Love the song...it is beautiful... |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
As a song it may work all right. But song lyrics rarely make "good" poetry. Lyrics usually need the background of the music to really present themselves properly. This one is certainly no exception. But hey, welcome to PIP/CA anyway. Pete |
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