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PoeTik JusTice
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0 posted 2004-09-16 06:21 PM


This is a very rough draft, I've been dry for a long time, so please help me with this one! It's just a simple one.  
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Run with me
Run with you
Let's be free
just us two
Share with me
make me new
Endlessly
we'll be true

Take this hand
tie me down
Here I stand
in this gown
Wear this band
like a crown
In dreamland
we shall drown

Words we say
from the heart
Make this day
our own art
Love won't frey
it won't start
Come what may
we won't part


XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

[This message has been edited by PoeTik JusTice (09-17-2004 04:19 AM).]

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