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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-04-28 04:28 PM


Look up at the night-sky and what do you see?
Stars-millions of them-shining brightly.
Anytime you feel alone or confused,
Cast your eyes toward the stars to give you a boost.

For each one of us has our very own star
So we may find comfort in each other wherever we are.
Friendship survives in spite of separation
Because our stars can take loving messages across ocean or nation.

My dear, since I cannot be by your side
Allow my star to be your guide.
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 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 04-30-2000).]

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Sasikat
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-04-28 05:39 PM


ESP,

This is such a nice tribute to a friend.  It can be comforting in the thought that anywhere in the world, we can look at the same stars and pass our thoughts to each other.

Sheila


 ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-04-28 05:43 PM


When your love has wandered far
You can wish upon a STAR.

I like it

Jon

Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-29 02:50 PM


Very nice sentiments in this, Lizzie!

Denise

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
4 posted 2000-04-29 02:57 PM


Hi ESP:
I enjoyed this poem my daughters name is
sweetly sentiment, also
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 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
          -Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
  PrincessPoet



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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-04-29 03:53 PM


Thanks for the replies everyone!!

Princess Poet- I had a friend called Naledi which is "Star" in Setswana! She sure shone brightly in my life as I am sure your daughter does in those blessed to know her!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie




 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
6 posted 2000-04-30 05:27 AM


Hi Lizzie.. haven't been ehre for a few days.. (sorry everyone, take me a little while to catch up on all your fabulous poetry..) This is a warm, touching poem, Lizzie, for your friend.. she must be a very special person.. beautifully written.. a friendly friends poem.

Lynne

SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 45

7 posted 2000-04-30 02:02 PM


Lizzie what a wonderful poem... you did a outstanding job.. Keep up the good work and hope to see more of your outstanding poems..  and thanks for sign. mine.. thanks again!!!

Much love
S&I

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
8 posted 2000-04-30 05:30 PM


Lizzie, This is a very nice poem.  
Angelicgodess_81
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9 posted 2000-05-01 01:38 AM


I love your poem its so true to friendships and relationships.  )
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