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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Magic is something we all encouter in life, the kind of magic that cuts our souls like a knife. This kind of magic is strange,pure,& mysterious. It makes us all feel a little bit delirious =] I don't mean the magic of sorceres,witches or magicians. I mean the kind of magic we feel in certain conditions. As when storm clouds fill the sky & raindrops fall as if diamonds to our eyes, they plunge & dive into the murk of any scum ridden pond, & make the surface sparkle like gemstones donned. The elation we feel when beholding something beautiful as that, or when gazing into the eyes of a loved one,whether it be brother,sister,lover,friend,or cat =] All these things are precious & dear to our hearts. We must all pay attention to life's littlest parts. Life's gifts are abundant,but rarely payed attention to, the ones we notice are magical,but few. < !signature--> And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson [This message has been edited by Swåmp¤Faerÿie (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This poem is magical!! I love it! Beautifully written! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I agree swampy. Magic abounds and surrounds, we just need to look. Your poem will remind all those who read it to see what they are missing. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
There is magic in your words.  Loved it. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wonderful poem. I like the magic in simple things too, but do you really think it's magic--or was it planned that way? ~Gene |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
A good reminder S. F. lots of magic in my life......tend to forget sometimes....ty. Jack |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!! Swamp Faeryie: The poem itself is magical, Thumbs Up! From Me. Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Magic here magic there There's magic nearly everywhere To see this magic takes no book All you have to do is .......LOOK Your Dreams are looking good Swamp Jon |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Thanks all =] I so much appreciate all your comments and i would welcome suggestions on my poetry too =] Gene= I don't beleive in predestination or fate,but i certainly do bleive simple things as mentioned were created for our pleasure =] Jon= love the little poem up there ^ =] thanks again,i'm grateful,can you tell??¿ And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Nice work Swamp Faeryie, I especially like the word pictures that you paint. Well done! Jester |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
"There is magic all around you if I do say so myself and I've know this much longer then I've known you" ^_~ The Exprerince of Survial is the key to the gravity of love Enigma Bard Gypsy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The simple things in life are the most precious! Beautiful poem! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
David Copperfield may be good Breath-taking, death-defying stunts his magic gift But i still prefer the glow of warming sunshine that beckons my day The start of sheer moments of magic life has to offer me i enjoyed reading your poem and i think you have met the challenge very well  |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Thanks again Jester,Gypsy,Denise,and Kaile!! Hey Kaile,i like the wee poem you replyed with...it's cute!! =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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