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breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA

0 posted 2000-04-26 07:40 PM



Breeze

The breeze weaves it magic
and you feel my touch
It caress your body
and you feel my breath upon you
It leaves you
and makes you miss me.
It swirls around you..
and you dance with me.
you know the breeze
and you know me.



© Copyright 2000 Samir - All Rights Reserved
John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-04-26 08:26 PM


Welcome to the Pub.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-26 09:21 PM


Welcome to Passions, Breezeinnc! This is lovely! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-27 02:58 PM


Welcome to Passions and the Pub, breezeinnc!! This is a lovely poem..great first post..looking forward to seeing more of your work!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
4 posted 2000-04-27 06:48 PM


Lovely sentiments. Welcome to the pub.  

~Gene

KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
5 posted 2000-04-27 09:11 PM


Welcome to Passions and the Pub!  


Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-04-27 09:23 PM


This poem is delightful, welcome to Passions,  
breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA
7 posted 2000-04-27 09:30 PM


Thank you .. All of you.... for a wonderful welcome.....
Breezeinnc

PrincessPoet
Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
8 posted 2000-04-27 11:24 PM


Welcome, Welcome
   2 the Pub
   Once U start, U don't wanna Leave.
  
    But, that's a Good Thing!!
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 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
          -Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
  PrincessPoet



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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

9 posted 2000-04-28 04:33 AM


In both your poems you express well your loving sentiments.WELCOME.

Whadya drinking.

Jon

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