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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-04-26 03:43 AM


Beware the Little Child Mind

I often wonder what prevails
In a little child mind
So small and frail and innocent
No malice does it find

It only seeks the playfulness
Lighthearted fun and jest
And pleasure in the warmth and love
In those that it knows best

It’s always searching every corner
Discovering the new
It knows no limitations
Though experiences are few

But don’t be fooled by innocence
A little child is wise
He understands so much more than
You and I surmise

He may not understand each word
That we adults discuss
But knows the language of the heart
Of love and care and trust

You cannot fool a little mind
With phrases in disguise
So be aware what you display
In front of little eyes

Fits of anger, humiliation
Rudeness or disgrace
Can be engraved forever
On a little child’s face

He learns consideration
And understands respect
He imitates these qualities
Much more than you’d expect

Beware the little child mind
No greater treasure will you find
No hate or malice of any kind
Is born into a child mind

Elizabeth Santos

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John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
1 posted 2000-04-26 04:38 AM


Beautifully written. My kind of poem.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-26 06:03 AM


Another lovely poem, Liz! You describe the mind of a child beautifully.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-04-26 06:59 AM


Liz,
  This is so simple yet so profound, so much we take for granted, not realizing what impact we have on those around us, especially our children. This is SO well written and your point is WELL made. Thanks, Dennis :^)

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 2000-04-26 08:03 AM


How true ! Another piece filled with wisdom .....
Wonderful writing, my dear ......

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-04-26 10:30 AM


Wise words, Elizabeth. They do 'know' so much more than we assume they do, don't they?
And they remember it all!

Denise

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2000-04-26 12:33 PM


Wonderful piece, Liz.  

You have to see with a child's mind before you can find enlightenment.

~Gene

freckles
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160
Virginia USA
7 posted 2000-04-26 01:47 PM


Liz--This is a wonderful poem!!  It's amazing how much little ones "see" and "know."  They are so innocent, yet so discerning.  Thanks for sharing this one, Liz!!

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
8 posted 2000-04-26 02:44 PM


i thoroughly enjoyed this poem, thank you very much

rich-pa

 "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

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