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Jonas
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0 posted 2000-04-23 02:43 PM


Not sure if this belongs here. It can be moved at the moderator's discretion.


A Consummation

Your essence remains
I inhale you
with my every breath
The memory of milky skin
soft and warm
glistening in the candlelight
Exciting my senses
and creating within
unbelievable sensations
which rock my very being

God how I miss you!
Those tender moments playing
over and over in my mind
Just you and I
Pressed together
beneath warm blankets
Spooning; melding
Exchanging warmth and breath
as the April rain
softly patters against the glass

© 4/23/00
Gary Pence



 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
- anonymous

© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-23 03:01 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Gary! Soft and romantic! Yes, it belongs here!

Denise

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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-04-23 03:48 PM


I totally agree with Denise and echo her sentiments. Thanks for sharing it here with us.  
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-23 04:27 PM


You heard the moderators....this is wonderful and here to stay!! Great job and thanks for bringing it in here!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

  
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[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 04-23-2000).]

Gene
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4 posted 2000-04-23 04:55 PM


Romantic and beautiful, it belongs everywhere.

~Gene

Jonas
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5 posted 2000-04-23 06:29 PM


Thank you very much everyone. This is another poem that is very special to me  
Songbird
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6 posted 2000-04-23 10:44 PM


Beautiful tranquilly displayed most affectionately. Great poem.
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7 posted 2000-04-24 04:01 AM


Jonas~
Very tenderly portrayed.
~*Marge*~


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