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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-04-21 07:07 PM

thank you,u_gene for posting such delightful comments in my "Never Meant to be Mine"--shall attempt to write these for you

")

Love Unreceived

"Hello.Who is this?"~
"Why have you been leaving mails?"~
We exchange numbers~
Oops...I dial the wrong digits~
Arrggh...mushy mails for wrong girl!!!

An Erotic Call

Deep heavy breathing
"Oooh,sweetie!Hi!Are you bored?"
"You,me,let's have sex!"
"Don't shy,dear.Give me a kiss!"
Slams phone,sweating profusely

Multiple Personalities

"Hi,Chris,is that you?"
"No,sir,Chris has gone away"
"But that's your voice!!"
"No,fool,you don't understand"
"I am Prince Charming today!"

My Mysterious Admirer

"I lust after you"
Giggling girlish voice
"I miss your hot bod"
"I want to make love to you!!!"
"Stop it,Chris.Don't fool around!"

Amnesia

"May i speak to Chris?"
"I don't know,sir,who's Chris?"
"Oh,Chris,stop making jokes!"
"That's obviously your voice!"
"No,sir,i don't know my name!'

hope that pleases you,u_gene...thanx a lot,i really had fun writing them!!!

^.^

though suggestions for improvement are always welcome

^.^

BTW,Love Unreceived really happened to me once...i have been paging the wrong person and leaving messages....(Damn!)

may i ask also which one of my efforts appeals to you the most?

^.^

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-21-2000).]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-04-21 08:43 PM

It's getting hot in here, where's the fan...LOL

I guess these are nice, I don't know that much about Tanka's, I'll leave it to the expert Gene to decipher them. I'm going to get some air now...LOL

PrincessPoet
Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.

2 posted 2000-04-21 09:27 PM

Kaile:

I really enjoyed reading these.
They're quirky and, made me

Continue writing I'll continue reading

Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-04-22 04:09 AM

well, these are neat, kaile ^_^ I am not sure I like the "An Erotic Call".. but, they are all well written.. ^_^ interesting concept, in "Love Unrecieved" and "multiple Personalities", i like those two best.. ^_^

Lynne

[This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 04-22-2000).]

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-04-22 07:58 AM

lol....excellent tankas, Kaile!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

5 posted 2000-04-22 05:14 PM

LOL Good ones, Kaile.

The "Erotic Call" Actually happened to me.

Hi honey, love you
This was not my girlfriend's voice
What should I do now
I'm looking for a real man
Would you be interested
----

Like the loyal fool I am I said, "no I have a wonderful girlfriend," then hung up. One month later I broke-up with my girlfriend. I always wished I hadn't hung up.

~Gene

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