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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-04-21 11:05 AM


Mirror, Mirror On The Wall

I wake up in the mornings and see my face
always just been average to these eyes
I could use a little motivational upbeat pace.

Spring is springing in the air releasing hope
long walks on beautiful roads invigorating
giving my mind and body a new way to cope.

Age is chasing me as I run to try and escape
never me is what I told everyone, now look
it's trying to grab me and cause me to drape.

It won't happen seventeen looks too delightful
I'm reversing gears going back to my youth
that's my goal for appearance to be insightful.

I'm grabbing the bull bucking away those years
taking on a bronco is sure to make me soar,
as limitations have always stood creating fears.

With the sun now rising I shall exhibit willpower
taking on my own challenge beyond a doubt
knowing I am capable of reaching my own tower.  


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-21 11:37 AM


Wait for me....I have some catching up to do!! Great poem, Gloria!

Denise

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-21 12:26 PM


This is a really neat poem, L.D.!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-04-22 05:07 AM


neat poem! mm.. bum, Lizzie already said that.. lol.. well, it is, anyway. ^_^

Lynne

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
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4 posted 2000-04-22 08:47 PM



This is what age does
It chases us all,
But remember
Lost Dreamer,...
You're as Young as You Feel


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
5 posted 2000-04-23 05:17 AM


THAT'S IT!!...HEAR THIS.....LISTEN UP....I don't need a mirror...I know I'm old and don't look so great anymore(if I ever did)..but darn it us olduns sure as all getout do get a whole lot smarter...LOL
WTG Lost Dreamer...goodun...woke me up.

Jack

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