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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-04-18 11:19 AM


Dreamland

Intense dreamland flowing
sweetly singing melodies
sunrise near morning skies.

Dreamland intense wrestling
body misplaces connection
destination slip lower leveling.

Once upon morning dawning
laughter edging eruption
story unfolds floor laughing.


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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-04-18 11:27 AM


Dreamer that was some dream!!

Jon


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-18 12:44 PM


Yeah...some dream!!! Great poem too!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 133
Long Beach, Calif.
3 posted 2000-04-18 01:49 PM


Whoa!
What a Dream, Like a rollercoaster ride


 Poetry & Frienship,
From: PrincessPoet

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-04-18 02:39 PM


Great poem Gloria. Wanna send me a dream ?  
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-04-18 02:44 PM


Thanks everybody, the real story that unfolds here is me falling out of bed and ROTFLMAO
twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
6 posted 2000-04-18 02:46 PM


I would like a dream like that too....now...where's my elbow pads?
Exciting poem L.D.

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2000-04-18 08:25 PM


Hey, this is an awesome poem.. so.. good!! ^_^ I love the way you have written this.. hehe.. yes.. falling out of bed.. ^_^ you have expressed this rather well!!

Lynne

Denise
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8 posted 2000-04-18 09:58 PM


hehehehehe.....I haven't done that in years and I don't think I was laughing when I did either!!  

Denise

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