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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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No one to turn to No where to hide She's running lost Screaming inside Peel off the mask Look closer still Tears are falling Down into h*** They fall in silence Darkness grows Pools of tears spread At the bottom of her soul. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Yo, Angel, Not bad, so who is that 'her'? eh?the poem is really depressing. but yeah, that's what makes it a good poem. Jõmes |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hey, this is a lonely poem Angel.. good expression of emotions.. well written.. I like it  (yeah, good question.. are you the 'her'?) Lynne |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Very good description of the feeling of depression. Been there! Good poetry!  )God bless you all. :-) -debbie- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
liked this one as well...i do hope you are not the "her".... ")best regards |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
liked this one as well...i do hope you are not the "her".... ")best regards |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent description of depression. Very powerful. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Good Poem Angel Hopefully just a memory? Jack |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
B.W.A. I hope the "her"...if you are, don't forget that poem I wrote, I am here for you. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Great poem, Angel--even if it is dark. I think poems like this are actually very good. It's good to get these things out. "No one to turn to"? Hey, what about all of us in the Pub? ~Gene |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Hi Angel! I find that Truely Good Poems are those that come from the Heart and, When a Poet writes what they know. I Like yours! Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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